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Hi, Im Jonathan. Im just promoting my self as a DJ. Here, I believe is my best song. Im open for any ideas, constructive criticism, and tips on how to improve my songs. Thanks
im pretty sure i could have made that beat or something close to it on my phone..im sorry but constructive criticism = i feel likei jumped back in time almost 15 years...maybe take a step back and listen to some new stuff from different artists see what everyones been putting out the last year or 2 and see the trend that has followed over the past 10 years
Are you trying to promote yourself as a DJ, music producer or both? Having been in the industry a while back, you're going to need to figure that out first because as of right now, I have no clue as to what you're trying to do.
Secondly, I don't know what your musical background is but after listening to your track, you need to take some lessons in basic/elementary music composition.
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I like it. I think you need better transitioning between changes of melody and the symbol/clapping sound towards the end makes it seem like you are using a cheap soundboard, also doesn't go well with the rest of the song- take it out. Also the ending could of been a bit more fluent.
Does seem a little oldschoolish but there's nothing wrong with that if the song is good. Reminds me of Alice DJ.
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