Not bad, especially for your first time!
I'm no pro so I can't comment on framing or lighting, but one easy thing that I find makes videos like these POP a bit more, is matching your shot cuts with the beat of the music. So when there is a sharp note, beat change etc, make your cut right there, or a milisecond after. You did it at :15-:16 with the black out, but there were lot's of other times throughout that could have been more precise.
Originally Posted by LSF22
Every time I'm there I usually see Jgresch's name under "Best Lap Times"