[murmur]

Hey all,

(I hope this is allowed on Revscene). Currently I am doing a Social Media Project for my Marketing Strategy class, and I am doing a spoof advertisement on iPhone Siri.

I have based the story on the famous Forever Alone character :alone:, and I would to ask the Revscene to watch my group's video and give us feedback. I would appreciate if you like the video too :D

(If mods think this thread is inappropriate, please feel free to closed the thread).

Thanks will be giving out, and thank you everyone! :)

mur.

Video:
BUS 446 - Forever Alone (iPhone Siri spoof video) - YouTube

[Nightwalker]

I lost interest before the halfway mark.

[murmur]

I thought advertisements were 30 seconds.

good point, but my professor did not have a specific time limit.

[Nightwalker]

I realize 30sec doesn't apply to all advertisements, ninja edit on my post with what I meant by it.

[Vansterdam]

:heckno:

[K-bad]

Its too long

[turb0fr3ak]

:seriously:

[124Y]

The "Foreveralone" part is too long IMO. Also, the transition between the sad and the happy parts could be smoother. Otherwise, it's more of an artsy film than an advertisement lol.

[shenmecar]

that was crap.
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[CRS]

Read the thread's comments...

Didn't even press play

:fuckthatshit:

[LSF22]

Agreed with the "Forever Alone" parts being too long... but good job!

*Was that at RPM at 1:20 after the scene at the elementary? Were c-lais staring at your forever alone face lol

[Razor Ramon HG]

Don't like the style of presentation

[doma]

typical over the top hipster/artsy video.

do not want.

[tiger_handheld]

i dont get it ...

[sonick]

Aspect ratio is all wrong on the video parts, you have 16:9 anamorphic footage squished into a 4:3 frame. You gotta either zoom in and crop the edges or go letterbox.

[TheKingdom2000]

what class were you in that a teacher/professor made you watch such a dumbass short?
i stopped at 1:55.. i couldn't even make it another 40 seconds

One would think it would be at least funny...

[shawn79]

:heckno:

the beginning reminds me of the movie "21th century boys" where Fukubei had no friends then turned evil trying to kill everyone...

[spideyv2]

Aspect ratio is all wrong on the video parts, you have 16:9 anamorphic footage squished into a 4:3 frame. You gotta either zoom in and crop the edges or go letterbox.

This.
Didnt really look like an advertisement either, more like an artsy skit
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[bluejays]

You should've taken an IAT course. I think I'd be more deterred from buying an iPhone 4s if this ad was actually real.

[bicboi]

read comments in this thread
played video regardless
left thread unsatisfied

[RabidRat]

Hey all,

(I hope this is allowed on Revscene). Currently I am doing a Social Media Project for my Marketing Strategy class, and I am doing a spoof advertisement on iPhone Siri.

I have based the story on the famous Forever Alone character :alone:, and I would to ask the Revscene to watch my group's video and give us feedback. I would appreciate if you like the video too :D

(If mods think this thread is inappropriate, please feel free to closed the thread).

Thanks will be giving out, and thank you everyone! :)

mur.

Video:
BUS 446 - Forever Alone (iPhone Siri spoof video) - YouTube (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9tc4AfiIOts)

I thought it could've been pretty good if it hadn't dragged on for so long =)

[Graeme S]

Let's be serious. Nobody would ever pitch a product that starts by insinuating consumers are lonely and poor saps.



You and your group, sir, are fools. Good day to you.

[The_AK]

would rather re-watch twin turbo integra video

[sindragon]

i want my 15 seconds of life back. Seriously, all honest opinion, it was crap. Too long, boring story, makes no fucking sense, HIPSTER/OLD SCHOOL FILM STYLE? WTF WHO DOES THAT ROFL ART STUDENTS DO.... do a 30 seconds or less and this time, just use simple editing instead of this hipster shit