Video Critique
 

I know this is the photographers corner, but I've been around a while and know you guys a bit, so I thought it'd be okay :P
(and you guys prolly have a better eye than the general population lol)

This is my first video I've made (except for a walk through a home), so I don't really know what I'm doing. Any comments and criticism would help a lot.

Thanks!

I'm not a video guy at all, but I'm gonna say overall it was pretty good. I like the music choice/tempo. I like the use of the rail on the pan shots. I think the only thing that bothered me was the shaking of the camera for the first minute of the video, and some of the panning was a little jerky, like you were caught of guard on the speed of the cars and had to catch up. I think that just takes more practice, to get a technique down.