Very good read, sent it to a few buddies, they said it was a good read too.

Thanks for posting OP

very interesting read. it's worth reading for sure

i wonder where he could write something like this and not get traced back for the murders and selling drugs, i mean if this were all true.

Wow excellent read. 40 minutes gone and not wasted.

Very VERY good read. Quite emotional as well.

It's like Heroin. Read the first 2 paragraphs and you're hooked to the end; pretty much because of the topic of the story as well as how well-written the author made it to be.

The whole time reading, it felt like Blow (by Johnny Depp) meets Wonder Years because of the way the story is narrated.

This reads like a bad high school Literature class short story. I stopped at this line:

"with eyes as blue as the latticework of veins and arteries crosscutting their way to and from her heart"

Not worth the read, that's for sure. And if you believe it's true: :facepalm:

I call a little bs at the end. You have a mystery informant and a tip leading you to his apartment and don't connect? Yeah, cops are that dumb.

Good read though. Well written.

He sent everyone to Pauls apartment, then called the cops, what's there to connect?

You can't tell a good story with a single sentence or paragraph, guys...

I enjoyed it... occupied part of my morning.

awesome read. very well written. he should sell that as a screenplay

Very much enjoyed it. Smart kid.

Tried to read it again, couldn't make it through. Can't believe people think this is A) good writing and B) even remotely possibly a true story

*shrug*

good story very well written

It's a good read. It may not be real, but it's entertaining nonetheless
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holy shit

not as good as the prison story, but still a good read
the censored words were annoying though...

Good read....that last part of the story is false...no way he lucked out like that.

fake...

dammmnn son!

bleh.. ok story.
Typical story you can find in any library.
Pickup a book people...

fuck..thats some intense shit...

good for the kid who ends up leaving..and 60Gs sittin in ur pocket @ 20 is not bad either... @.@

You don't need good writing or a true story to tell a good story.

awesome read. thx!!!

Does this have sparkly vampires? Not reading if there isn't.