protein gummy.....yum?! :confused: :D

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did a small model shoot today.

u like?

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Took it in a cemetary? It's ok but I can't really see her face. That license plate looks oddly placed.

Don't know if I'm suppose to be looking at the car or the girl.

Thanks! I used a Minolta 50mm f3.5 macro lens.

The lighting is super flat. A reflector or off-camera flash would do wonders here.

hehe, my first portrait shots, thx for the critique, alot more to learn :)

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Show the rest of them :).

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1432/...7b9fdcce_o.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1007/...930253d7_o.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1365/...18341955_o.jpg

here are the others that came out better then the rest. i didnt get to take much, because i didnt really setup this shoot, it was for my brother in law, i really just had to bring the bike and car :) but i took some anyways :)

yah i need to learn alot more about portraits, and lighting, but i gotta start somewhere.

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So you had to do this for your brother-in-law. GF/Wife or is it the vehicles he own cause you said you brought the vehicles :). Nice cars! I think the girl would be prettier with less make up. Overcast day you shot on, no harsh shadows or anything to have to watch out. Definately a good start. Looks like you have some good friends and cars to work with.

If you're doing portraits, I'd try to do them w/o the cars next time. Less to think about?

I am uncomfortable with the location... lol.

Nice shots! Interesting location. I've taken a few pics there before. Beautiful girl too! :)

my brother in law worked with this model before, and she wanted to do another shoot with some sort of import car scene. so my brother in law asked me if my car and bike could be in the shoot, i said yah, so my brother in law drove my car, and i rode the bike there. this was all setup through www.modelmayhem.com

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What's your name on model mayhem?

What's your name on model mayhem?

Edward Yee
Mayhem #403263

its on my sig

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Atlantis: I do like the concept of your photos, but I think something is missing. Maybe there's too much...the background is too busy. Maybe shoot from farther away using a larger aperture with a medium telephoto lens. Shoot during the magic hour for that golden light.

...and go to a less morbid location!

I agree with using a longer focal length as these were taken with a wide angle.

thx for the comments, yah when i heard it was gonna be at a cemetery, i was pretty hesitant. But i said what the hell. as for the lighting couldnt do much cause it was all overcast, and yah we did start a bit late cause the makeup artist took a bit longer and just as she was finished putting the makeup on, it rained a little but then we had some peaks of the sun coming through, but not long enough sometimes. I just picked up my new sigma 10-20, thought i'd play around with it to see what it can do. :) probably gonna pick up the 50mm f1.8 for portraits since its pretty cheap :)

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Here's a better one. Thought i worked at 445am this morning, but i work at 9am. So i drove around and took a few pics. Here's a decent one. :)

http://i19.tinypic.com/61mg0id.jpg

Comments and Critique welcome!

Aside from being really slanted, that's a wicked pano!

haha.. i didn't notice that! I'll fix it when i get home from work later on. It was 630'ish am when i put it together.

just saying a quick hello...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v470/vitz/ginza.jpg

mofo good thing i posted all my pics b4 u started to post urs..

awsome as always Dennis